Monday, August 9, 2010

Introduction/Thesis Statement:
It is amazing how often animals are used in the area of research for medicinal purposes or labeling of products. Over the course of time the use of animals in research has been the subject of much controversy. Some believe that it is completely inhumane to use animals for this purpose and others stand hard on the absolute necessity of their use. Lack of education in the field of research could certainly be a main cause of the reasoning behind the latter idea. Areas of medicine are advancing greatly through technology and knowledge of diseases and are finding it harder and harder to keep up with the great need for new drugs to cure or treat of many health issues today. Lack of education in the field of research could certainly be a main cause of the reasoning behind the latter idea. Many medicines and vaccines created have provided substantial proof that there is and always will be a benefit to using animals for medicinal research.
Area of Support 1:
People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals (PETA) are an organization extremely well known for strongly dis-agreeing the use of animals in research.
Area of Support 2:
The National Institute of Health (NIH) is a government regulated organization who funds millions and millions of dollars to aid research being done with animals every year.
The Food and Drug Administration (FDA) requires that products be tested in animals prior to being placed on the market for use.


Area of Support 3:
Animals are used for many different types of testing, for instance the toxicology and safety evaluations performed for the use of products by consumers. Many people are unaware of how extensive the use of animals is. Chances are ½ of the things consumed orally have been tested on /by animals prior to being allowed to be sold here in the United States. Every day use items such as cosmetics, household cleaners, liquid gardening materials like pest and herbicides, the chemicals in plastics of children’s toys have also been tested for labeling .
Area of Support 4:

CONCLUSION:

In order to make a difference in the advancement of medicine or to promote the safety of the products we use in our every day lives I find it necessary to promote the use of animals in research to help make our world a healthier and safer place for our children to eat, live and play.
With out the knowledge we have obtained through this important resource we may be killing ourselves and our future with out it .

2 comments:

  1. This looks like a really good start. You've done a great job including the other viewpoint in your thesis and making sure your point of view is clear. I like that it looks like you will be addressing the other viewpoint in your paper as well. Make sure that your voice remains the dominant voice in the paper and that you are using the information to back up your point of view. In other words, keep coming back to your overall point. Well done.

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  2. You have some great supports! Its real brave to start your paper with a largely recognized opposing organization, but I think you'll do fine in responding to that counterargument. It was really clever to put the part in the conclusion about killing ourselves without it. its a strong point you could refer to it more. Nice going!

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